Commentary On 20090923 Blogs

The blogs posted over the past few days were pretty good. I loved Dans and I thought Madelines was pretty good too. Some things that we need to work on are organization and order of thoughts. Blogging is great to just sit and sling ideas all over your page, but I think that you should be a little more organized and ordered when writing about the question that you choose. I find that Angel did a very nice job at giving you guys the criticism you needed (although in many cases, she was the only one to comment) and I felt that she was very helpful. More of you need to find a freakin' computer and spend some time on this site, and give your classmates the time and comments they deserve. Other than that very nice job at the first blog.

Here is your demotivational picture of the month! This one is for Ms.Garber, I know she will appreciate it!